Essay Advice from Admissions Directors
Greg is embarking on his admissions essay journey so I've gathered some advice from what I think is a really credible source -- admissions directors. These are the folks that have to read thousands of these essays every year. Who better to give advice on how to impress and stand out from the crowd?Interestingly they all have similar suggestions in the articles that follow. These same points have been echoed by many other admissions directors during our college visits. This consistency, and the source, gives me great confidence in this advice. In the links below you'll learn:
- Show, don't tell.
- Keep the essay narrowly focused and detailed.
- Let your own voice shine through.
- Take risks. Make it interesting.
Writing an application essay is a hassle, scary and prone to procrastination. But these admissions directors point out that it's your best opportunity to talk directly to the admissions staff and to make the case why they should accept you -- instead of the thousands of other applicants with similar qualifications.
These are all quick, easy reads and I highly recommend you invest a half hour internalizing their advice before you embark on that outline and first draft.
John C. Conkright, Dean of Admissions, Randolph-Macon College
Parke Muth, Senior Assistant Dean of Undergraduate Admissions, UVA
Thom Golden Associate Director of Undergraduate Admissions Vanderbilt - Part 1
Thom Golden Associate Director of Undergraduate Admissions Vanderbilt - Part 2
Labels: admissions essays, Randolph-Macon College, UVA, Vanderbilt


